Untitled from Richard Robinson on Vimeo.
Points to looks at:
Add more paint to the snatch image so where not left looking at a still. Give it reason to be still on screen.
Look at the appearance of the gun, is it working.. not too sure.
Sound effect on gun, put in as a draft but probably need to find something more appropriate.
Look at pace of the text at end.
Get rid of the splatter at the end as it's video material and looks out of place anyway.
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